MikaFreak123

Hmm, this to me seemed a little rushed and not really taken into idea. But that's alright, writing is rewriting. I did however like some of the flow. But to ...

I really liked your flow and wording, I think you have a great way with writing words out. The only thing I didn't really like is the word "bubble" but ...

I found this kind of comical reading this inside my head. (Not meaning offense) This sounds more like a venting to me but I'm not a professional writer (none of ...

This is really really great. I love this because I can relate so much to it. I like the way you actually used the wording right and I actually thought ...

Amazing. I love your writings! I can just imagine this being sung right now.....and someone playing a guitar in the background, ahh what a lovely thought! Ever thought of selling ...

Wow, I like the imaginary in this. It's really great. I honestly can't say there wasn't a thing wrong with this, it was absolutely amazing. I could really picture everything ...

I am in no way an expert on scripts but I loved this. I really was sad to see the end, I was like screaming "no no please don't end!". ...

I actually like this. It's smooth and the flow is very nice. I wish I knew what it was about though. Just a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Character not ...

This is AMAZING. I absolutely love love LOVE it! I love the description and the words you used. It was a perfect length, didn't seem too long nor; too short. ...

Hello Miss Aimee xD I'm here to review. I can honestly say, this is a beautiful piece. But I wish I knew what it was about >_> But that is ...

Oh, what a lovely piece. I personally love the second stanza. It smoothed along great with the poem. I can't think of anything wrong with this, so that's good! I ...

Hi Teneall, I'm here to review :) This chapter was a little more fast paced then the first one. "Shut up your going to get us in trouble", I wispered ...

Hi there Shia, I am here to review :) I agree with what Grant said. This is fast paced and I'm really confused. I'm not really sure what's happening or ...

Oh. My. God. !!! This is AMAZING. When the chapter slowly ended, I was crying "No, no no!" It felt like I was reading a published book by a famous ...

I really enjoyed this. At first I had to read over again to understand what it was about lol! (: It's different, which is a good thing. I've never read ...