Midnightmoon

Thanks. I will definitely edit this poem. What you say makes a lot of sense. I'm not good at self-editing. :D

The poem is awesome!

Sorry about posting that twice. Computer glitch.

Very strong poem! It's plain and simple, which makes it all the stronger. The typo of ugly might want to be fixed :). I like how in each and every ...

Thanks!

Thanks! I just have fun doing it, but i want my poems to reach people, if that makes sense. :D

Thanks! I just did some editing, using your suggestions, hope it makes it better.

Thanks! And keep the nitpicks coming. That's what I'm here for, advice. :D

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Thank you! I've got one ready and I can't wait to get reviews on it, Just need to rack up some points to post it. :D. I hope that when ...

Beautiful! Beautiful! It describes exactly what happens as we grow up. The way we stop pretending, and come to adult-hood, when we leave childhood behind, the images and memories leave. ...

Welcome!

Thank you! Thank you! I am open to any advice.

Thank you! I just got started, so I am open to advice.

Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear it.