Midnight

Argh it's so hard when you can't hear the music. I like them, I know it's ska but I could imagine Busted singing something like this. But still it's fun ...

I thought it was interesting, I think I assumed it was a metaphor for a relationship because if it was straight story it was a bit too quick to be ...

You're a great writer, i've been keeping an eye on your other stuff. I didn't like this one though. For a war poem it felt a bit too hooray i'm ...

Ooo sickly dark and it feels like I can take out the depression and squash it into a ball and let it seep into my brain. Which probably isn't so ...

I think that it was good in concpet and layout. Like the beat was good, but I just think the words of this poem didn't quite get across the severity ...

This reminded me of a Natasha Beddingfield song. Not sure if you know who that is but nevermind! It was very pretty and great imagery. I'm studying Pope at the ...

Is this visual poetry? Just wondering how you would attempt to read this. I don't know if I love it personally but it's certainly interesting and differs from a lot ...

aww Robby, guess who is this. Dunno didn't like the rhyming but I've never liked constant rhyming couplets so ignore that comment. It's that great bitter edge that you always ...

It was pretty funny, reminded me of an Ali G joke about Mary being a Virgin that I saw years back. Anyway it was a bit of fun and to ...

Ooo nice haven't read poetry written in the style of Prose since my exam english couple of weeks ago, now that play 'Volpone' I didn't enjoy, this I did. Gorgeous! ...

Interesting to know which piece of music made you write this, but I suppose that's beyond the point. I enjoyed it, it was blissfull and quiet just what a poem ...

Well that history revision went well. I agree with Incandesence about the grammatical changes, but then I see your point about it beings yours so that weighs up. The imagery ...

Wow I loved the first stanza, I'm a real sucker for short lines in poetry when describing beauty. It was weird, but the constant use of Ws, made me think ...

Very interesting, you've got a really good tecnique for writing interesting non-fiction was is definately not easy. And although horrific allready your structure really improves the read. Thinking of

Hmm. Haven't reviewed anything in a while but i'll give it my best shot. I really enjoyed the idea of the poem, I wanted to know more, it reminded me ...