MiddleEarthGal

May I first start off by saying Bravo? Your timing with the whole thing is really great. I think my favorite line was "In His eyes we flourish, in our ...

First off, may I say that I love where you are going with this? For fifteen minutes worth of writing, this is just pretty darn awesome! On to the reviewing ...

May I start by saying that this is a really good poem? I am not one that reads poetry often, but I have gotten into it more lately, and I ...

Country is better. (Sorry, couldn't help it! XD) But YOUR country song is one of the best I've read! In all seriousness, everything flowed great, and your sense of humor ...

Girlio, I loved it! Here are the very few errors I noticed... "A group of drivers standing in a loose circle, talked or smoked, killing time while waiting for their ...

"That is all I could wish form a happy life with a beautiful wife," -'From' and '.' ;) "I caught up to George easily, and could here Nicholas and Benjamin ...

"Chelsea chuckled. “You actually did really well for a beginner, but you probably can cross Apollo off the list of who your godly parent might be. Which means we aren‘t ...

DG, once again, you have created a wonderful poem. :) I love the Proverbs 31 woman, but you took her to a whole new level. While I was reading this, ...

First off, this chapter had me laughing really hard at the part about Chelsea's stalker for some reason. XD I liked it, and you are doing a great job describing ...

I only noticed a few little things, otherwise this is just pretty darn awesome! I think you meant 'Rear-view' mirror instead of 'Review' mirror... Jagger was about to ask him ...

Oh my word, Red! Now I simply *have* to join ya'lls 4-H! My cousin, also known as our pastor's youngest daughter, is sitting next to me, and we were both ...

I can't believe I haven't read this yet! I loved all the descriptions, especially the dress. Oh, how I want that dress! LOL And the strange, starry-eyed boy intrigues me, ...

Woah... This chapter really threw me for a loop! (In a good way!) I really was shocked when the King said that Isabel would marry the Dauphin. Let me know ...

Nice job once again! I love the relationship Isabel and Charlie have, and the bet they made had me laughing! ;) I know this is going to sound weird, but, ...

I didn't know you had posted more of your story!!! :D I really like this chapter, and I'm SO going to read the next ones A.S.A.P. ;)