Micheley

Okay, first of all, If no one's reviewing because my chapters are that dreadful, someone please tell me! it'd definitely not because you're chapters are dreadful! It was super interesting, ...

No criticism at all, except for you made it to interesting (seriously, nothing wrong at all) and now I'm hooked D: Could you please tell me when the next chapter ...

This is adorable!! It's so sweet, but also sad (I mean, obviously. The dude dies, and leaves behind his girlfriend! I should stop rambling now). Like AnAmericanTeenager said, it seemed ...

Once, there were people on YWS who decided to nickname Galerius "Fluffy Bunny". This stupid meme spread like wildfire. Eventually, they all got weird and exotic diseases while he lived ...

Hello! This is a great piece! It grabbed me and made me want more. Where's the next part? D: Alright, on a serious note, there's only a few things that ...

I stumbled toward the throne in which a human-looking man was bestowed upon. He had pallid skin and hair as dark as his heart. Cruelty was written in his coal-black ...

Oooh I'm super excited for this story! Maybe try to describe the character a bit more? I didn't know it was a girl until I read the description, and still ...

Micheley here! This was super cute! I kinda want a second part lol :P Here we go :D Varsha- who had been asleep all this long , woke up, rubbing ...

Awwwhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! So cute!!!! Emotion was weaved into every word; I almost started crying. It's so beautiful! At first I thought it was a girl writing, but then Amy came and.. ...

That was so incredibly adorable!! :D I loved it ^__^ The only thing I could find is, and that was when I finally admitted gravity had humiliate d? me in ...

Rylee had a dream of being a scientist and marrying a girl who was smart and loyal and not to mention, defiantly I think you meant definitely not me, at ...

Andrew and Kevin were arguing about the better sport, Sean and Sheila were bickering about their food while Hitomi watched amused I think it should be either, watched with amusement ...

Oh my sweet goodness. I almost cried! This piece is incredible. I love how you went back to the girls giggling and boys laughing at him ( The girls didn’t ...

This was SO good! I almost felt like the main char., and even found myself grinning like a retard at the screen at this part: He tells a joke, but ...

Awww this is so cute!!! It's almost like I can feel what they feel and getting attached to them. Ok! The underlined means that shouldn't be there while the red ...