MiaParamore

Loved it, kg17. I told you never to stop writing and this is very good. very good for your age. I saw many mistakes but as you don't want any ...

Hi winnie, I liked your piece but it was hard to know what was going on. Maybe you should read it again and again as a reader and not as ...

I loved the story and is surely better than the Lakisha thing you did. Oky, why didn't you PM me for this like you every time do? :( The idea ...

I've seen some signs of certain Paranormal things. I beleive in them. I am an avid believer of such things. Its not necessary that a paranormal spirit is evil or ...

Hi whtevr88. Thanks for the PM. I really wanted to read the story. You have modern touch of writing which drew me in. One doesn't have to go over those ...

However , I do understand that this is the end of everything. I couldn't find any error and I liked this futuristic image you created. Would really like to see ...

Hi here to review. :D @AnNguyenle: You need to show the writer its mistakes. then only he/she would improve. I mean all i I do is sit in class and ...

WOW!!! For the first time I have seen a character this unique. I loved your wiritng easy going and casual. I specially loved the bracket thing you did for putting ...

Hi whatevr88. I loved the story and your easy way of narrating it. I specially got hooked on after reading the secret agent at CIA part. That is amazing and ...

Hi. Thanks for putting up the rating. here is the review: My mother and I resembled each other quite a lot.We both have thick, dark, chestnut hair, tall, hunching figures, ...

Hi Lavabubblingout. I am here finally to pay you back for all the support and guidance you have been providing me with in these past two months. Seriously, I have ...

In return she just sat and held that grin. I rolled my eyes and she winked back. Laying my head on the desk, I yawned. The morning had been exhausting ...

Hi KillTheLights. I really loved the story and the thought behind it. The prologue was short, simple and sweet. There was no grammatical error as such except for the ones ...

In exactly seventeen minutes and around thirty seconds, class ends. I'm staring at my watch, taking a break from my doodles, waiting for the class to end. I think it's ...

Hi Amnien, I loved the story and your narration style but I have one problem with this. The synopsis says that it is about Frankie but he seems to be ...