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Hi dreamy115. I am here a bit late but at last here. :D Here are the nitpicks first. “Well,” he said in a light tone, “ typically (not needed seriously) ...

Hi. I loved this. Dear Alyssa, I have watched you through the years, my sweetheart. The guys that have liked you have mostly liked you for your looks, right? Well ...

Hi Isha. So I loved your this experiment with Non-Fiction. I totally loved this and i think it would prove helpful for those mature-minded people with no self-respect or operspective. ...

Hi once again. I loved the pain you made us feel in this chapter and I could really picture this so thumbs up. This, I think, is the best part ...

Hi Skins. I am here again and hope to find some nice continuation to the fist part. I stared blankly ahead of me. It felt as though I was going ...

Hi Skins. I am here as requested. I really loed this story of yours. It's so refreshing. I had planned to read ti before but just forget about it. But ...

Once upon a time, there was a young writers ' convention in Washington, D.C. Hey LittlePetRock. I didn't get mention but that's okay. :) I couldn't get any point of ...

Hi i am here as requested. This greatly upset her and her family, especially her father, who died the next year. I don't find a grammar error in this one ...

Hi Esther. First of all, welcome to YWS. :D I had been seeing your this story for two-three days and was quite curious to read it but couldn't find time. ...

Hi wastedfantasy. I am finally here. So here are the nit-picks. Ten year old Marshall Tucker was on his way home after being at his friend ' s house all ...

Hi Biffle1. Here I am at last. You told no nit-picks but hey those will improve your piece I guess. "I'll help ya decide," cheered Beavery , the beaver, "what ...

Hi Rayquaza . I liked the story very much. It was so much confusing at the end. Now that your project is up, try to expand this into a longer ...

That’s when it happened, a sound like t hat of a metal hitting a surface. With who m ? Were the questions that passed threw my mind. Threw past your ...

I know you may not understand this, and that it could cause you more grief than you were meant to bear, but it is your duty to (towards or for ...

Hi Skittles. As I have said this before, I am loving each and everything of your story. The setting, the weird characters and the MAGIC. here are two mistakes I ...