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Re: Jessica: Protection chapter 1
Hi there Aliza. Such a Pretty name! HERE TO REVIEW. WHAT EVER i LIKE WOULD BE IN PINK AND THE WORDS I ADD IN GREEN. SUGGESTIONS IN BOLD. I’m Jessica ...
May 8, 2010 -
Re: deleted
Hey Yuriko! I have been seeing a lot of your work around here and wanted to review but mostly it was poetry or rated 16+ but I found this piece ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Whatya Want From Me
Hi Curious. What's up? You didn't tell me you posted this. :smt005 Just send a PM next time. I'm here to review. Things I like= Green Things I've problem with=Red ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Six ~ Part Two)
Hi Skins. HEre to review on request.I would mark anything I like with mauve and my comments would go in bold, as usual. Corrections in red. I hadn’t gotten it ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Thief: Chapter One *Needs help & I hate the title!!*
Hi Jass. Sorry, I'm a bit late. Though Skins has pointed out almost everything, I would try to give my level best to help you out. :? I'll colour what ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Dollhouse [Ch. 2]
Hi Raz. This part of the story was not as much nice as the last one was. :( This seemed so much confusing and hurried but it can just be ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Dollhouse [Ch. 1]
Hello RazHuni. The title of your story finally drew me in. :D Anything I like would be marked with pink (still my fave colour) and anything I hated would be ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Swing Chapter 5
Hi Lydia1995. Here on request. Shall we get to the nit-picks first? “Lila, wake up,” gentle hands shook me awake. “I know it’s early, but you’ll be in trouble if ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: My Mama
Hi Impera(If I may call you that)Your story is very much different from what I have been reading here but the thing remains is that your grammar is really poor ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Popularity Wars Chapter Two
Hi Amy. Back here again. I think I am in love with your writing! :) You're truly gifted and wonderful writer. You should try in for a competition. This story ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Popularity Wars
Hi WritingWords. I had meant to do the review earlier but just couldn't. But I am finally here now. Lets look at the nit-picks:(I will color whatever I like with ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: BURN. *Book 1 of the Crows Peak series*
Hi *singerofthenight*. Sorry I am here late but I am here. I think I couldn't get much idea from the prologue so its great. Prologues are supposed to be like ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Trust~Proluge
Hi Jolene. Welcome to YWS and I guess this is your new post. As Snoink said this seemed like you got this fabulous idea and just put it down on ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Always With Me
Hi horselover. Here to review for you. :smt045 He seems to always be there , whispering in my head. I can never see him, just hear him. I feel his ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Who is My Daughter? Chapter 2
It's been six months after I've arrived back to my home planet. Sally had divorced me when I was in space. She 's has remarried to a man named Its ...
May 1, 2010