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Hey jem. As promised in the chatwall here I am to review. I might not be able to criticize much for the very reason that it was short and also ...

Hey *coco. :pirate3: First of all a big invisible hug and chocolate for requesting a review. I really wanted to a novel's review as it's much fun and you have ...

Hey tigs. 8) My review might seem very much similar to my other ones because of the very fact that I think you don't take any notice of the grammar ...

Hey tigs. I am here yet again to review. :D All we wanted to do was congratulate her on dumping that idiot! Such a funny line! More sarcasm. Everyone says ...

Hey here I am tigs at last, to review our story. I really do hope I like it. :D You know when a girl says 'I hate you' to someone ...

Hey LastPaladin. Sorry for the late review, but I had been busy and it took me almost two days to complete a proper, in-depth review of this, mainly because of ...

Hey Day. I believe that I am a bit late. *coco and Isabella have pretty much covered everything, so I would give a general review and sorry if it doesn't ...

Hey there, Sol! :D The first thing that struck me was there was no proper spacing between your note and the story. Either you could have made it into a ...

First of all, Hola Chika !...(that's all the Spanish I know) Well first of all I want to ask one thing: You really live in Egypt? Wowwww..... *jumping up with ...

Hey Tamara. I am so happy that I could get you to type what probably you have been hiding there for months. First thing that struck me was that you ...

Hey I liked the concept. But don't you think it's very long to be called a prologue “And what about you?” I, object. " A husband protects his wife.” “Even ...

Hey bookgeek. Despite whatever others have said, I liked it. It gave me a neat feeling. I agree with ofi r though that the concept wasn't different but I liked ...

Hey I am back yet again. “Okay that building over there is for the boys,” She said pointing at it. “and that other building is for the girls, now go ...

Hey Solvalery. Here to review again. You have got some pretty good reviews from others so I won't bother you repeating the same what they have. I have mentioned one ...

Hey here to review, of course. The beginning paragraph : Well, it was kinda boring. I mean the concept of the pigeons coming to her was very cute and sweet, ...