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Where the words are written but their (get rid of the 'their?') not spoken Where you speak your mind and the (get rid of 'the'?) rules are broken You can ...

I like this poem :). I can't find anything wrong with it, except for the comma that should come after 'my life' like this: My soul, my life , you ...

Hi! This is a very nice poem, with some fairly confusing questions, it made me think for a bit. :) Some little things: What is death? Is it being born ...

I agree with the last reviewer that this stanza's formatting is a bit weird: We used to find comfort, and protection. Confidence, and escape in each individual pleasure. What about ...

This poem has a rather depressed sort of feel to it. With the lost souls and all that. But it's still really good. There's a bit of subtle rhyming here ...

You described inspiration perfectly! Just some little things: Sometimes, inspiration evades me, Hiding like a shadow in the night, Descending into that deep , dark hole, my mind. Sorry, but ...

((Hey, had to write a couple poems for class, sadly though, this was to only one that I could find...)) My Own World Like a portal into a far away ...

Wow. That was awesome. Paper that I folded , scented and sent to you On Valentine’s Day. I think that a comma there would make it look a little bit ...

Loved, loved, loved, loved the title. I can not say enough how awesome it is and it suits the poem perfectly too! The first stanza was my favourite. The way ...

Hey there! Well, the second haiku, I think that you could maybe replace the word 'site' with 'sight' maybe? I'm not too sure about the rest of the poems and ...

Hey there! This poem has a very nice structure that fits in perfectly. I also liked how you used an imagery. These three lines in particular: Broken Vows Young as ...

Wow. This is a beautiful poem. It flows perfectly and the structure is great! I loved how you've put rhyme in there as well. It has a really nice gentle, ...

I liked how some of the lines rhymed, liked: But look up to sky above And the stars will remind you of our love and If you fly you could ...