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Hahahaha. Hey, have you checked out Is It a Dream?

Well you may manage to still read it out of order somehow:)

Thanks for the review. My E key has lots of problems, and this was a rough draft, so that is why there are so many pretty obvious things. Thanks though, ...

Very welcome.

Yeah, that isn't the standard way to rad stuff. ;)

On it now.

Alright, finally here. So the point of view here is more of a bystanders view. I didn't really want to get too much into the heads of the fighters because ...

So Umaima here to review your amazing poem! I smiled when I saw this Umaima, because that is a line I sometimes use for the opening of my review.

Alright, I understand.

I will respond shortly.

Thanks for my writing abilities go to God, and punctuation and grammar thanks goes to @Liaya. And reviewing thanks goes to you and all the other great reviewers on YWS! ...

Yeah it does a lot. I have seen plenty of formatting problems on here.

Will get to editing soon. So excited for all the good reviews I'm getting.

Thank you, will edit soon.

Thank you. Will edit soon.