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Thanks for reading> I originally had more on why the two are fighting, but it turned into "telling" versus showing, so I edited it a lot of it out. I ...

Hi, thanks for the review. The spacing thing is because it puts those words as links for some reason. Changeling it isn't possible.

WHOA!That is an amazing profile picture.

Carbon I said I was disagreeing with it. I in no way said I hated the post, or Grav, either. In fact I have enjoyed her other writing. OK, might ...

Thanks!

Thanks a lot. I believe God has given me a writing talent and I intend to pursue it in full force. I do have the next 7 chapters written out. ...

I just don't get how you believe that as a Christian.

I just disagree with it.

so far I've enjoyed everything you had posted, but not this.

Angry, no. But confused, yes.

Angry, no. But confused, yes.

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wow, that edited ending was really good!

ok, just didn't want it to look like I am trying to steal your work. Also, I would put an authors note telling why i wrote it, and what it ...

Well if I did write it I probably would post it, and it wouldn't be the same as yours. I wouldn't write it in first-person for one thing.