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Wait! IT DID! See what amazing things come out of you talking to me! *Takes 50% of credit.* JK. Good job Grif.

Thank you. This was just an idea that popped in my head a few days ago. I don't really intend on continuing it, but you do still help me for ...

Oh this was most helpful. Thanks a lot! I will hop on those grammar problems soon. Also, I realize the reaction time is sorta awkward and I will be working ...

Oh this was most helpful. Thanks a lot! I will hop on those grammar problems soon. Also, I realize the reaction time is sorta awkward and I will be working ...

I actually realized the reaction part after I had written it. I will jump on it soon.

I had to read this after seeing it on the home page so many times. And then had to read the reviews to get what it meant. *Dork moment*

Thank you Duke! It helps. This was previously unedited, but people really like it so I will hop on it and edit sometimes over break.

Wow. Thank you for the review. I wasn't expecting such good things about it. LandStriker was just a name that came up at the moment. I might change it. I ...

Oh wow. That is just so powerful in such a short amount of words. You wrote this perfectly too. I absolutely loved it. Also, I wasn't sure if this was ...

Thank you. I will get on the double words, and please do read the sequel. I think it will explain a little bit more of your disappointment.

Loved it.

That was beautiful!

Thank you that helps!!! You might want to read the sequel. ;)

This chapter is un-edited, so don't feel the need to point out the overuse of commas. When I wrote this I wasn't to learned in the use of commas. :)

Most of what you say is right. I never have edited any of these chapters, so the commas make sense. I used to be a commaholic. The age group is ...