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Re: The princess with cancer.
ho is this featured?
Apr 8, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 26 (Revised)
me sees this
Apr 7, 2014 -
Re: Omega
no i like the comma things. After I realized how it worked I think it goes well. keep using it.
Apr 7, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 1 - Breakfast at the Inn
thank you. The part where she stopped was because she was making fun of people not sleeping when she herself is was up late. Jeric later says it, but I ...
Apr 7, 2014 -
Re: My Best Friend is Gay.
good thing you put the disclaimer. I think you were making people even sadder :P
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 1 - Breakfast at the Inn
There was a lot of great visual detail, and the way you slipped it in with the action was awesome. (It's a feat I have yet to accomplish...) Yes!! Glad ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 1 - Breakfast at the Inn
The technical part is actually a writing style. I've seen other people write like that and I really like it so I used it here. The beauty sleep part is ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Tears
bahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Childhood Is Dead
how do you mean nicer? You realize that he may take those other poems rather offensively?
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Childhood Is Dead
oh boy I mean OH BOY . . . if some people on here see this :P
Apr 5, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 15-16 (Revised)
no I did one for EACH chapter silly
Mar 31, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 11 (Revised)
Pssh like you'll beat me. You know how I get when I'm on a roll :P
Mar 31, 2014 -
Re: Mr.Fellows
funny beginning Iggy XD
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Title
why is it that you make the lines like that? I've never seen it done
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue
Well this is very happy review. Glad you liked those parts, they were both something I tried to work on specifically.
Mar 30, 2014