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thanks kbmc! Good points. this is actually more of a prologue, and Percy is not the main character, and that's why there isn't a TON of emphasis on the whole ...

thanks Segreto, we'll work on those asterisks! Please feel freeto follow the story! we should be updating it soon!

hmm basically i know. it's kind of sad. i'm not sure what happened to good literature.

what is this and how is it getting likes? O.O

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please keep reading, this is only the first chapter. there are more ccoming

idk if this was supposed to be funny or not so i won't comment

Hey BLue! yeah, it really isn't that mean of a punishment, but like Castor cares about that. "IT ISN'T FAIR THAT THEY ARE DOING THIS OK! I DID NOTHING WRONG!" ...

hahahaha glad to here it mummy. I shall definitely take note of thine point-outs!

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Kinnard? heee heee heee who knows? And you can thank Mr. John Flanagan for the arrow-removing details! Wouldn't know a thing about it if it weren't for reading his books! ...

Still can't remember now can we mummy? and secrets are secrets XD

yes it is

Hey mummy, good point with the bees. I hate wasps and jackets and . . . will change :) Triune IS the God. The true one. And yesh, I should ...

not sure whether to leave a long review or a simple comment or just leave. i think the comment may make you mad XD