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hey thanks for the 3 reviews! It's bee a while since I hit this story up. Summer has been chaotic as you know. I do plan to have more Alec! ...

if you would like to go back to the beginning I would be more than grateful :D

hey wolfi. I'll take the description notes and nicknames into consideration. The last bit I agree with you on. I want to re-write the ending bit of this confrontation again ...

hahahaahah yessss Archie's reins, not hooves xD So the caption about it being a filler chapter is because I accidentally posted the previous chapter twice, and so when I realized ...

i see what you did there "cleveh girl"

hahaahah how does one go about finding out how sea trolls feel in the depths of despair? xD thx for reviewing so quickly. Tips and commas noted ;)

In this world, there are more creatures than what we have on earth, but they aren't magical

Yes, it's an oversight that has been pointed out ;P

yaya thanks. I'll keep those sentences in mind. I guess iI meant to portray that Gwyn is kinda way out of it mentally

haha seeing dead people is a lot different than being told about them. This is his first combat

oh btw, the bit about Alec: hr's kinda cookoo. He's meddled with a lot of concoctions so he's not a hundred percent normal So his personality isn't hat he's reserved ...

Thx Shady %uD83D%uDE01

That makes sense! I think it would be a great story to come back to and flesh out a lot more.

Do you use it online? cuz it doesn't catch my mistakes unless I'm typing on a website. I usually put my chapter into after writing it on my microsoft Word

I get what you wre going for with the forest noise. And like I said, I don't think most people would notice, but I'm kind of a perfectionsit. I actually ...