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Re: Williwaw Chapter 24
Yeah I'm demanding myself that I finish a long form project for the first time since my very first book at 15
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 25
It's like getting presents %uD83D%uDE02%uD83D%uDE02%uD83D%uDE02 good points about Miles. Hopefully you like chapter 27 haha it may be a better iteration of him idk %uD83E%uDD37%u200D%u2642%uFE0F
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 24
I agree. I feel like you're really on my wavelength haha in the chapter where they sit on the mountainside after the dragon, I basically want to entirely re-write it ...
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 23
Lol maybe I should roll with Xerox. He hasn't been mentioned before so your goldfish brain is safe. And you're spot on again with Devlin's side quests lol that goes ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 23
Lol maybe I should roll with Xerox. He hasn't been mentioned before so your goldfish brain is safe. And you're spot on again with Devlin's side quests lol that goes ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 23
Lol maybe I should roll with Xerox. He hasn't been mentioned before so your goldfish brain is safe. And you're spot on again with Devlin's side quests lol that goes ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 23
Lol maybe I should roll with Xerox. He hasn't been mentioned before so your goldfish brain is safe. And you're spot on again with Devlin's side quests lol that goes ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 22
Bahaha welcome to the Club I guess. I'm actually glad you pointed out the dialogue tagging because that's been on my mind a lot recently. Dialogue is where I feel ...
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 21
Haha if it SEEMS off it probably is so just yell %uD83D%uDE02
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 21
Yeah. Any continuity errors you see PLEASE point out because that will easily be the biggest part of rewrites. I've changed, not just in some of the plot but also ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 20
Haha good points for sure. Hopefully that was improved in the more recent chapters, you'll just have to let me know!
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Re: The Legend of the Black Bull
Well to Sadoria he's not and this is from that perspective so yknow
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Re: The Legend of the Black Bull
Hey there. Thanks. I do feel like I could remove a few words throughout. It's a personal preference of mine to usually not punctuation at the ends of lines, but ...
Aug 23, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 27
Haha thanks. Feel free to reas through the rest to catch up! I'm slowly writing %uD83D%uDE1B
Aug 16, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 25
Thanks for the reviews. Bouillion is not a great guy lol I'll keep the dialogue tagging in mind
Aug 12, 2023