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Streams of children swept through the hall, a tangled mess of giggles and whispers and loud voices. I slipped along, an anonymous drop in a river of faces. That was ...

Here to review. This was a good chapter. I liked several things. It was a good length, not too long, not too short. The story is already one the interests ...

This was a really interesting idea. I like the way you wrote it as well. It’s my place to escape to, my own world built with my imagination’s tools with ...

Squire Malachi here to review for Knights of the Green Room. This poem has a lot of emotions in it. But I agree with Bard that this could be a ...

Here to review as a squire to the Knights of the Green Room. So, I don't know if these are your own feelings darklink, and some of them are good, ...

This was great, and I'm sure most writers flt this way at one point. I have to say that when I saw the small description before I clicked on this ...

This poem was very well written. It captures a lot of emotions, and makes the reader feel as if they are there. It made me think of storms in a ...

Hahahhaaha. Ah . . . Fiera is THE best! I love how she can be so bossy and or at times mature, but then she returns to acting like a ...

So I liked this poem a lot, it was really well written. The songs stuck in their throats overpowered by the symphony of falling snowflakes. Their autumn flames doused, their ...

I have to say this is just a tad confusing. He slapped me down as I tried to finish him...I had let her go into the box, So it says ...

Hey, here to review. So this poem is really nice. I love the way describe all the things the wind can be seen doing. Like the part about blowing the ...

Alright! glad to be back to this story. glad that we at least know what gender this character is. :) This just adds more to the question list. Who is ...

I'll go through in order like the prologue. It was a normal day in the palace. It still sat atop the mountain foreboding and full of doom. Just like its ...

I just listed things as I saw them, and then put summary at the end. The three of them watched the smoke as if wafted up into the air, when ...

you look back on any remember. should be and, not any. I'm glad you wrote this. I was wanting to write something about 9/11, but I just didn't know what. ...