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Re: Endless: Part VI
I forgot to mention that it seems like every time the chapter ends, Ren is about to be shot. Also, I don't remember if you had much about this in ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Rebuilding Thunder: Chapter 1
OK, so this is an idea I was working with . . . anyway great idea, and I hope you continue it. It seems pretty interesting, and I hope to ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: What Happened to the Time
Here to review is Knight Malachi, for the KotGR. Wow, that was . . . beautiful. That was a sad poem, but it still had the hop that we will ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: In the Night
Knight of the Green Room Malachi here to review. Love this poem. It has such a good moral, and it is so true. This is a very encouraging poem. Being ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Endless: Part VI
I thought for a second. “Touché.” I said, and continued walking. Hahahahahahaha. Love that line. By the way, this is a review for the Knights of the Green Room. So ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Detachment
Here to review for KotGR. This was a very nice short story. It had a lot of emotion, and for your age it was very excellently written. I thought you ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Wanderlust
Here to give you the third Knights of the Green Room review for our library. So the bad first. This poem seemed a little confusing. First off I didn't know ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Untitled Work 3
This review is for the honor and glory of the Knights of the Green Room Now, this poem was well written. It all rhymed good, you have a talent for ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: The Masked
Knight Malachi here to review for the nights of the green room. This poem was spooooooooooky! I love the main line, 'the man with the mask.' That was a a ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: The Ghost
Knight Malachi here to review. This is a creepy poem. But understandably so since it's a bout a ghost. So, your rhyming was superb . . . until stanza three. ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Kingdom Come
Here to get a Green Room Knight review badge. I would suggest putting a star next to the name Eoferwic, and then at the bottom put how to pronounce it. ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Paxton Chapter one
Knight Malachi here to review. I don't think I would have previously been able to read all this before, but I am trying to be a good Green Room reviewer ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Twelve Years: Just One More
Knight Malachi here to review. His hand went into his pocket and pulled out a pack of ice breakers that he proceeded to shovel in his mouth like a polar ...
Sep 22, 2013 -
Re: The Assassin- Part 3
Here to review is Malachi, Knight of the Green Room. I will post a problem if I see it, and come with a summary at the end. I waited until ...
Sep 22, 2013 -
Re: "Follow Your Dreams"
Malachi, Knight of Vindale here to review for the Knight of the Green Room. So this was short, powerful, and to the point. But I feel you completely left out ...
Sep 21, 2013
