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Re: empty
Soooound This is so good. Your imagery and similes hit home so well. I love the use of thread the reconnects to the stretching in the first lines. The likening ...
Jan 25, 2025 -
Re: 31 Hazardous Halloween Tales (Part Two) (Tales 5-9)
hi vampire! Back for more as promised. “Are you sure she wants to meet me? Why would she want to meet me? This isn’t some kind of joke, is it? ...
Dec 29, 2024 -
Re: autumn song
I DIDN'T KNOW I HAD A BARD ON MY READING TEAM That was so haunting. I could see it in Arcane, or a montage for any number of shows or ...
Dec 29, 2024 -
Re: Dead on Arrival, Chapter 2 (final part)
hi there, I'm back for more! Ugh. I knew this was coming :( Everything was going too well for it to all end up being okay. Alas, I have some ...
Dec 29, 2024 -
Re: Dead on Arrival, Chapter 2 (part 1)
Hello hello, and welcome to YWS! Happy Holidays and happy Review Day! I read part one but since it already had a few a reviews I moved on to Chapter ...
Dec 29, 2024 -
Re: 31 Hazardous Halloween Tales (1-4) (Part One)
Hello Hello and Happy Review Day! Lots to read here, so let's jump right in. Story 1 - I love a good play on Halloween myths. This actually showed up ...
Dec 29, 2024 -
Re: The Immortal Minority
hi there! Happy Review Day and Happy Holidays! What an intriguing title... I feel it ironic how a company founded on the production of baby soap stumbled across the means ...
Dec 29, 2024 -
Re: Crown of Coristol: Chapter two, (Inability)
hey, I'm back for more! I read chapter 1 but skipped to here to review for Review Day, but I did want to note that this had far fewer nitpicks ...
Dec 29, 2024 -
Re: The price of sin - chapter one
Hi there! Messy here on review day - happy holidays :) I really like your tone in this opening chapter. I think you convey Deinara's voice very well at times. ...
Dec 29, 2024 -
Re: Victoria’s story-The adventures of Poppy McLain
Hi Vampire! I don't mind some supernatural sleuthing so here I am. I do like the vibe of this piece. It has a fun combination of Hardy Boys/Nancy Drew and ...
Dec 17, 2024 -
Re: Crown of Coristol: Prologue (Beam and Prism)
Hi there :) Let's jump right in! I debated pulling actual quotes as I read but I think when it comes to the nitpicky side I'll just touch on a ...
Dec 17, 2024 -
Re: Deus Ex Machina
Hi there! here to give this piece some Green Room love! Whoa. This is so cool. I don't even know how to describe it except that this feels like the ...
Nov 29, 2024 -
Re: Our Love Became My Gallows
hello there! Green Room Knight Messy here in the darkest moments you were my guide. little did I know it was your hands covering my eyes i really like this ...
Nov 29, 2024 -
Re: War And Geese
Hey there. The title caught my eye. The poem did not disappoint. So, a little bit of context: I may or may not have an entire, serious, and just as ...
Apr 30, 2024 -
Re: A love like God's
Hi there. Welcome to YWS! Let's take a look at what you've got here :) And yes, the weed was laced with meth, and when we found out my mother ...
Apr 30, 2024