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Hey there! here to wind down Review Day and try to bring my team a win while also reading some great poetry! So, here are a few notes for you: ...

Back one more time today and I can say before I even read it that removing the bold lettering already looks better and is easier on the eyes to read. ...

Back for more as promised. 1. While it was difficult to read the large chunk in the prologue, this is sooo much more. A few tips for breaking your work ...

Hey there :) welcome to YWS and Happy Review Day! Let's hop in 1. I would personally put a trigger warning for this, especially with hos the last sentence goes, ...

Hey there and Happy Review Day as we wind down the stretch! Let's get to it 1. I love the overall feeling of raising poem. I always think that poem ...

Hey there! I won't be reviewing all of these in one review, but I want you to get some outside opinions, so let me know once this is out of ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day from the pumpkin teeeam. Let's hop right in. I'm not going in any specific order but just jotting down some thoughts. 1. I always love ...

It seems everyone is getting in on the spooky fun eh? Let's go through this and I'll make a few points for you to consider! 1. Overall, good vibes. I ...

Alright. Let's do this ooone laaast tiiime 1. Valid thoughts by Minerva in the beginning. You haven't stated it but it seems that her upbringing was not only rough, but ...

I'm still a'comin! Let's get right to it. 1. My overall thought is that this feels like half a chapter, or that the last chapter and this one should be ...

Back for Round Two! Just a quick note again about tense, and I won't being it up again. We've got past where it should be and present where it should ...

Happy Review Day fellow Pumkin! It seems that Minerva would get straight to the point, so I will as well. Let's check out a few things. 1. Tense - not ...

Happy Review Day fellow Pumpkin ;) I don't know what it is, but the poetry today is so mixed with beauty and grief xD no happy poems for me I ...

Hey there, and Happy Reciew Day from team Punpkin Pie Orange! I've got a few thoughts on this opening chapter, so let's hop in. 1. I actually love your opening ...

Hey there and Happy Review Day! There's a lot going on I'm this poem, and some interesting themes that are at war with each other. I like the progression from ...