Merry_Haven

salsashanno- Wow. I really like this story. I definitely got to read more. I didn't see much that could of been fixed. Otherwise I'm off to part three... -Merry

Ashley- Wow, very intense relationship between Isadora and Nicandro at the end. I like it! I definitely should read more...which I'll do right now. Thanks for posting this story up. ...

Ashley- Nothing much I can say. Besides what the others noticed. Um, is Isadora going to do something for the poverty stricken? Like in the next few chapters? That's all ...

Ashley- I actually wrote this yesterday, so it might be choppy. And yes, I noticed that I was telling things not showing them. So I'm gonna fix the chapters right ...

Ashley- Sorry that you had to do the correcting thing again. I thought it'll be easier for me to break it up in two parts. Anyway, thanks. Sometime today, I'll ...

Lucyy & booklover - Thanks for the helpful reviews. I actually revised and edited this chapter into two parts. So thanks, again. -Merry

Lucyy- thanks for the review! It helped and I'm going to edit it when I finish the next piece. -Merry

lucy- wow, thanks for reading what I have so far. It means a lot. I'll see if I can download the file you sent me. -Merry

Hey guys. Thanks for the helpful criticism, it helped a lot. I actually rewrote and revised the preface. So you can read it if you want to. So thanks again ...

Pattycakes, Wow. Thanks, I kind of needed that review. I think. And no, I want and need the harsh criticism. 1. Because this story is a dramatic one, it's hard ...

Dr. Jamie Bondage, Thanks for the criticism and you don't sound critical. I just need the criticism to help me improve. So thanks again and I'm going to edit it ...

Hey everyone! Just wanna tell you guys a little about Fallen Sorrows. Through out her story {Riley and Lily will have their own too} Eve remembers times when she went ...

ashleylee, Thanks again for looking at it! I'll try my best at revising it again for the fourth time. Maybe this time it could be better. Well off to writing... ...

alwaysawriter, Thanks I'll fix it right now. -Merry

Wow. I really like it but I couldn't get the second part about the boy. What was it supposed to mean, I guess this is the prologue anyway. Otherwise the ...