Merry_Haven

Hey everyone, so I got really inspired at night and wrote this. so here it is, for you to rip apart and critique as much as you want, no rude ...

*Angel of Death~ These are are my thoughts and comments when reading this amazing story... * Your beginning Note ~ I don't think this was too sappy but filled with ...

Classics, huh? I've read a few and I'm planning to read more. One I did not like at all (I'm not going to say, hate ) was...Willa Cather's My Antonia. ...

*ashleylee~ Here are some comments when reading this chapter... * Victorian Home ~ You have no idea (maybe you do) how your descriptions about the house make me feel. They ...

*Night Mistress~ Here are some comments I have when reading this... * The Home ~ Okay, if this is her house, then she's been a vampire for 55 years? Or ...

*ashleylee~ Here are some comments when I read this chapter... 1) Carmen and crew ~ He acts like a helpful but annoying older brother. It's like he's there for you ...

*ashleylee~ Here are some comments when I read this preface... 1) Title. I absolutely love the new title. But the thing is, if everyone saw the title to this story, ...

An old woman sat in a rocking chair with her hands in her lap, rocking back and forth. Okay, this a straight out tell. Describe about the rocking chair. And ...

*naturesgirl~ What?! That's it? That's the end? Sad. Sad. Sad. :( Well, I guess my thoughts were wrong. I truly wanted Adrianna to be happy with Landon (well mostly him) ...

*naturesgirl~ Wow. This is beautifully written! I loved every moment of it. It was like this story was written many, many years ago. Like a classic, you know. I love ...

Prologue Hey, Bri. Here I am taking forever to review this part. Sorry, about that. Adam, Landon, and I were in the “turning room” as we nickname it. It looks ...

*Sarah Hey, I have read all your chapters and this one also. The reason I have not reviewed them was because I was too immersed in this wonderful story. :wink: ...

This is a novel I have just started, set in the Victorian Times. It was previously set in 1920 but it was far too hard for me to write as ...

So this was my attempt at NaNo this year. I totally failed, but decided to put up what I do have to see if it's worth fixing up and finishing. ...

Picture Prompt 2. Enjoy! Waiting. Hey, Sarah. If this is picture prompt two, where's one? Or is there one? The bed is crooked. Two hands intertwined, fingers twisted in knots ...