Merlin34

Positive feedback only. Nah, just kidding, constructive criticism would be nice. I don't want EVERYONE just going "omg ur story is da best" or variations on that central theme. Even ...

Yeah, I've decided to make threads to house 3 chapters at a time. If you haven't read the previous chapters, you should. Chapter 4 Deadly Discovery The air was warm ...

I made a prologue for my story, Xavier's Quest, which you should be able to find. But this prologue wasn't part of it at the time. I'd appreciate critique and ...

This is a short story I wrote about a year ago for a creative writing class. I got an A, and I also managed to win a 4-H contest with ...

Here's a little story I've started, about a world where all animals start out as wandering spirits, until through their actions, they come to embody an animal, at which point ...

Don't worry, I'm not about to praise this doorstop. But has anyone here ever heard of it? It's a series (only 2 books now) that was first (self)published when the ...

The creature didn’t know what he was, who he was, or where he belonged. He stared out from under the fallen log at the expanse of forest before him, seeing ...

Chapter 1Lily Blossom “Oh come on!” shouted Xavier. “I finished my paper! Can you please turn the Internet back on for five minutes?” His father, Trenton, set down his crossword ...

This is just a little something I wrote for fun. Basically, it’s a look at writing through the eyes of RPG skill lists. Thought it might be kinda funny. Some ...

We are the Beasts of the Barrens, though most humans call us “ohmygodaaaaaaahs”, for whatever reason. From what we know of human expressions, we’re pretty terrifying, but we like each ...