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MerckkPR

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 3: Zai

    I will i will :) Good material you got there!

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Goodbye

    The story itself reminds me of so many teen suicides, yet i find interesting that in this short paragraph i see no back story, no reason as to why the ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Great Journey

    Thank you so much for your feedback! I am sorry about the run-on sentences, i forgot the punctuations haha, but it won't happen again! as far as the red coat ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Great Journey

    Thank you so much for your feedback! I will definitely get better at writing, it is kind of difficult grammar wise for me, since my main language is not English, ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Faithful Journey...

    Thanks for the tips! It has been YEARS literally since i stopped writing, and being English not my main language i keep having trouble with using the correct words. as ...

    Feb 22, 2014


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