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Re: Chapter 3: Zai
I will i will :) Good material you got there!
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: Goodbye
The story itself reminds me of so many teen suicides, yet i find interesting that in this short paragraph i see no back story, no reason as to why the ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Great Journey
Thank you so much for your feedback! I am sorry about the run-on sentences, i forgot the punctuations haha, but it won't happen again! as far as the red coat ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Great Journey
Thank you so much for your feedback! I will definitely get better at writing, it is kind of difficult grammar wise for me, since my main language is not English, ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Faithful Journey...
Thanks for the tips! It has been YEARS literally since i stopped writing, and being English not my main language i keep having trouble with using the correct words. as ...
Feb 22, 2014
