MeisterChan

Hey, Kara! Sorry, thought you were accustomed to it. Two people also continued it on right? I'm sorry if I made you uncomfortable! I'll take it down (it was a ...

Oh, sorry! If you don't mind me asking, what is the meaning of this section, i don't blame him%u2014nor do i blame you It sounds almost like betrayal from her ...

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:o No chocolate chip?? *cries*

Hi brooklyn, thank you for reviewing! :) I would say that actually the sentence wasn't so much breaking a stereotype, rather it was emphasising a critical problem. Older men find ...

Hey there, pkidchick! :) I was unaware of that, as far as I was concerned the only thing to be capitalised was "God" , but if you are correct then ...

Hey, outvaders! Thanks for the review :) I appreciate your criticism. Yeah, the structuring was a little difficult, it refused to put what I wrote into stanzas, even after I ...

Hey, Steam1244! No no, don't be silly, I value all criticism and you were right about that section. I'm so bad with poetry (this is my first time writing it) ...

Hey, Silberfee! Thank you so much for reviewing

Oh, I see. So sorry for mentioning it then. It would make reading the poem easier, so I hope they fix that issue! Alright, I understand :) It was a ...

Oh... Now I feel stupid, Lol. Thanks for writing this :)

Thanks for explaining! Ah, I get it now, thanks (I was little bit of an empty mind for a second, sorry) :D Yes, the long words were a little awkward ...

You're welcome! And don't worry, It's just my reader habit: I need to know more! I don't think it really effected the poem, my personal interest was just in that ...

Yes, I could really feel heartfelt emotion! Although the circumstances are not that great, I enjoyed reading a piece of work with true, experienced emotion. Thank you so much for ...