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Hey Panikos! It was fun to read especially toward the end! Finally found your backbone, did you? Interesting to see how much of an impact Gran's words had on P. ...

Hi Panikos! I liked the chapter. Things seem to be taking a more hopeful turn in the end. Me. Who’s me? A faer? Violet? Someone else? Mum—? I like that ...

Hi Panikos! Here for another quick review. This was a more emotional sub-chapter. We were told that it's painful for P to remember their mother. This time around it was ...

Hi Panikos! Here with a quick review! There are always crumbs trapped between the cushions. Truer words have never been spoken. I realized at the beginning of this chapter that ...

Hi Panikos! Brilliant ending to the chapter. I'll just get to the points— the TV is loud and it’s too much effort to follow the conversation I was left wondering ...

Hi Panikos! I love it as an opening chapter. Here’s how I know I’m home. Nobody asks for my name. I thought it worked well as an opening bit when ...

Hi Cyr! I love the title. It's grabs a reader's attention and also tell the reader what to expect. I clicked without a second thought and the essay turned out ...

Hi Jazen! I can see that it's short but it feels heavy. In my opinion, it's a poem about irony. There goes the light, good bye my heart In simplest ...

Hi HG! First impression: I love the concept. I like how you maintain a divine being's point of view. Millions of people probably died and who knows what else Professor ...

Hi Elinor, The formatting is great. I didn't find any typos, although (paraphrasing Paul Thomas Anderson) technical errors only make a script more real. I liked how you used the ...

Hi Fishr, It's admirable that you never hold back in your writing. You certainly did not hold back with Parasomnia. You attempted to dive deep into John and Sam's psyches, ...

Hi Green! If you don't mind, I'd like to point out some typos first and then dive into the work. Though the exact date of its arrive in London is ...

HI JAYBIRD! In a way, the poem attempts to answer the age-old (kinda) question of "What's worse than a break-up?" The speaker has never been through one. But I suppose ...

Hi Riellehn! It's really fun to read, I love how it rhymes. I kept wondering who's the Keeper though. The poem could be referring to a psychiatrist, a friend, a ...

Hi Alliyah, What I love most about this poem is that it manages to carry this melancholy weight throughout. It does a good job of capturing that feeling, Or rather, ...