MeherazulAzim16

Hello, 4revgreen! I haven't reviewed a story in a long while, so, truth be told, I'm nervous. Regardless, I'll try my best. "Data Entry" presents to the reader a rather ...

Hello, Helvetia! I had to sit with this one for a minute. I felt stunned. Still do, so this review is going to be a mere attempt on my part ...

Hello there, TWR! Good day to you. You can call me Meherazul or MAS. I'm dropping by today to share my thoughts on your poem. It's mostly going to be ...

Hello, Kae! I'm here to review "Dawnbringer"! It's a short story but it felt/read to me more like a poem (and I liked that!), if that makes sense. Usually when ...

Hello there! First of all, I loved the voice of the narrator. Really pulled me into the story. Now let's get right to your questions. does this sound like something ...

Hi Ari, Another very late review coming your way! (Sorry about that. I can't help procrastinating.) I thought about reviewing the poems individually (and I probably still will, at least ...

Hi Ari! Here with the review! Before I begin, sorry for the delay. I know it's been a while since you requested it. First thing I noticed about this poem ...

Hi Morrigan! I loved your poem. It made me think, so I'm here with a review. You've incorporated some very interesting images into this one ("whites of her eyes glinting ...

Hello Liberty! Doing a review after a long long time. Happy to see you posted new chapters! I thought Julian's introduction went well. [ Spoiler alert ] There was this ...

Hello Lady Gemstone and Ethan! (This is actually going to be my first RevMo review :D ) I like that every line is very direct, and thus vivid. The images ...

Hi Liberty! I've been meaning to review this for a while. I love that we got a full chapter following Akol. He is probably my favorite character in this story. ...

Hi Morrigan! To start off, I think the narrator has a misotheistic point of view, which is really interesting to me. From what I can tell the poem contains references ...

Hello whatcha! (i consciously made sure i got the capitalization right :) ) First of all I wanna say the artwork is BEAUTIFUL!!!!! SO GOOD. The poem mixed with the ...

Hi Tanishka! The poem interested me. I see you brought up some commonly spoken consolations and tried to deconstruct them. I love the idea! Every cloud has a silver lining, ...

Hello Mage! Chapter 2.1 gives us some good insight into Quinn's past. You managed to convey a lot of information about her without making the prose boring, or seeming like ...