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Re: Promise
Nice work of art! My friend said that it reminders her of MineCraft. I love this peice. As far as I can see there are no erros! Keep working on ...
May 1, 2013 -
Re: Fire Within
Comment: Wow, you are so talented! Very nice! I hope to see more of your work! This poem is so amazing! Errors: 1. All your lines need to be capitolized ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: Love Is Like Math
This is such a cute poem :) I like it alot. It doesnt look like you have any errors to detect. Keep up the good work! :) Megz219
Mar 19, 2013 -
Re: memories
Wow, This is so good! It has very nice discription. It's sort of depressing but it's really good. Keep writing. Now some of the things I noticed was that you ...
Mar 19, 2013 -
Re: Fall of the Twin Towers
Red April 29th, Thanks you so much. And to answer you question it took about 10-15 mins to write this. I will most likely post a new peice(s) soon. You ...
Mar 13, 2013 -
Re: Death
I like this peom because it has really, really good descrpition of a broken heart. Keep writing more poems! You are really talented. :)
Mar 11, 2013
