MegaLizardLord

Awesome! Though, I think the lines were a bit too short. Other than that, wonderful! Keep writing! You did fantastic with the detail and imagination. :D

Wow, that's very sweet. It reminds me of the book The Giving Tree. I hope I hear more from you! :mrgreen:

Great job! I like how you showed your point of view within the poem. It really makes me wonder about what you said now... keep writing! :D

Haha, I love it! You did an amazing job with the perspective of the poem. I hope you continue to write. Nice detail too. :D

Very interesting... I liked it a lot! I don't have much to say... but I do hope you write a lot. :)

Haha, cute! :P I like all the dialogue a lot.

Nicely done! It really makes me able to imagine all the detail. Hope you continue to write. :)

I like it a lot. Maybe break it up a bit more but wonderful anyway! I hope you continue to write, because this was a fantastic poem. :D

Great! I love the beauty that's deep within it. 8) I don't know how it could be any better. I hope you continue to write.

Wonderful. I love all the detail and fun all around it! I hope you continue to write. I would definitely read more! :P

Great job! I like all the rhyming and questions. 8)

Fantastic! That actually inspired me to work harder and never give up. :lol: This so far is one of my favorite poems.

Nicely done! I could really imagine it in my head. I hope to see more from you!