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Thank you all. I really appreciate the feedback. (It's especially nice to hear that my poetry is all right, because I don't write it very often.) Imp, d'you mind specifying ...

Ah. I interpreted that as more of a "you are Hermione's daughter" than "that is Draco Malfoy's son" sort of thing, if you know what I mean. I guess that ...

She is the Goddess of Women and Weaving, but all god and goddesses are made up of "goodness and purity and love", which she lost when she began killing. Then, ...

If it isn't really Japan, I wouldn't use Japanese in the title. The kimono you can probably get away with, but ... yeah. Sometimes our eyes changed color but kept ...

(Ah, and Meep - nine and ten would be an archaic and modernly awkward way of putting nineteen.) Oh, duh. I feel like an idiot now. :oops: (I've even taken ...

They're pretty vivid on the computers I checked, but I'll look into it. Can I ask what browser/platform your using, and what your brightness/contrast is, or at least if you've ...

She. S he's looking for critiques. :wink: (I, er, get that a lot in real life.) I figured it would go under art, 'cause mostly I want(ed) feedback on the ...

Just an idea, maybe there should be a limit on the number of books/series an author can have on the list? (Just like for awhile, New York Times clumped the ...

I like the idea of it, but somehow, it doesn't quite get there. It's the same ol', same ol' imagery of time. I think more concrete examples would strengthen this: ...

Oh, haha, that was me forgetting to delete the rest of a sentence that I'd rewritten. I'm so sorry, I feel like such an idiot! :oops:

I hate to necro a dead thread, but I wanted to say thank you (and that I'm sorry I just got around to responding to this)! I'm glad you guys ...

It was written as slam poetry, so it doesn't go down "on paper" quite so easily. :oops: Even read aloud, I'm not sure how much sense it makes.

I figured it could be read as a stand-alone sketch, where the reader could fill in the details with their own imagination. I have a hard time remembering that most ...

I've actually never heard of it, but I'm a big Pullman fan, so I'll check it out. Can you give maybe a little information, plot sypnosis, sometyhing? (It doesn't sound ...

This is actually a short story that takes place in an alternate universe to one of my (much larger) pieces. (Phew!) Hence them not being introduced properly. I do really ...