NOTE: I wrote this story a few months ago in response to learning about a friend who was bulimic. She's since started eating and keeping it down, in part because of this story. I just reread it before posting, and I know it needs to be reworked, but I'm not exactly sure where. Critiques are helpful!
Revised 4-12-2007
"It shouldn't be taking him this long," Ted thought to himself. "Usually he's in and out."
Ted had been waiting for John to come back from the school restroom for 20 minutes. The basketball game had been over for a while, and there was still no sign of John. Fed up with his absence, Ted ventured over to the restroom. He opened the door and was immediately greeted with the horrible stench of vomit. Ted remembered a kid in the first period of the game run to the restroom, but even if he threw up, the smell would not linger this long.
Ted walked into the restroom and saw no one in the urnials. Ted then got on his hands and knees, looking under the stall walls for John's feet. He recognized John's shoes, but looking at them, Ted knew something was wrong. He ran over to the stall that John was in. Ted kicked open the door and flipped John over. John's eyes were closed, and his shirt was stained with blood and vomit.
Ted shook John, and John's eyes fluttered. He looked Ted in the eys and started stammering, "I'm sorry... I'm sorry... I'm sorry..."
Ted yelled at John, "What are you sorry about? Why are you sorry? Sorry for what?!"
John stammered incoherently, then said, "I thought I could quit."
"Quit what?" asked Ted, anticipating the answer.
"I felt fat," said John, "so I started making myself throw up. When I got to the weight I wanted to be at, I--" John gagged -- "I thought I could quit. But then I couldn't keep anything down." John's lips trembled, and a single tear crawled down his face. "I'm scared," he continued hoarsely. "It hurts to swallow, man. Something's wrong with my throat, and it hurts to swallow my own spit."
John coughed, turned to the toilet, and threw up blood. He turned back to Ted and said, "I can't handle this, man. I feel like... I feel..." John's eyes rolled to the back of his head, and he passed out.
Ted was on the verge of tears as he yelled at his friend. "John! John wake up!" he shouted. "Do not die on me, John! We can get you help!"
Ted violently shook John to wake him up. Weakly, John opened his eyes. The two stared at each other for what seemed like an eternity. John reached his frail hand to Ted's shoulder. John mouthed some words, but Ted couldn't make out what he was trying to say. "What? I can't hear you, John," said Ted. "Speak up."
John's eyes started to gloss over. With tears running down his pale face, John let out a barely audible whisper. "I'm sorry," he said. "I'm so, so sorry." John's hand slowly slid from Ted's shoulder and landed on the floor.
Ted stared at what was once his best friend. There would be no more late nights watching movies and drinking Mountain Dew. There would be no more comics drawn in class. There would be no more inside jokes. All Ted could do was stand up and walk out of the restroom, numb to everything around him.
Before he left, Ted stopped in the doorway, looked back at the body that once was John. John's eyes were half open, his body limp, his shirt covered with stains of vomit and blood. Ted sighed, turned off the lights in the restroom, and walked out of the school. He climbed into his car and pulled out of the parking lot, wondering how his parents would take it when he told them.
If his parent's were like him, they didn't know.
If the town was like him, nobody knew.
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