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M'kay, first thing~ don't "disclaim" your work like you do in the, erm, subtitle-y thing. Always have confidence in what you write, and that way even if it's horrible, you'll ...

“Chris, hurry up with that potion lad, we have to go soon,” called Kirin, Chris's wizard master[s] named Kirin[/s]. Just editing for flow. Don't feel like you have to stick ...

I think you've got an interesting premise, but there are a few things I'd work on. First is her tone; she says she's been in Hell for six million years. ...

Personally I loved the Aziraphale/Crowley pairing. oh wow, I agree with that ^_^ Me, three! :D I, too, love Good Omens (and am a casual Aziraphale/Crowley 'shipper). It is so ...

Hmmm...I'm thinking "Hexwood" by Diana Wynne Jones (which is her equivalent of "LotR", slogging-through wise.) Oh my God, that book was #@$%!. I finished it - eventually - and my ...

First thoughts: Show, don't tell. I, personally, hate stories that start with characters waking up. Why not show him being up all night? Get us right into the action, with ...

"Are you ready, love?" I asked him, clutching his hand. ¶ Aidan[1], my blood father[2], was ready to drain his blood and replace it with ours. It was a painful ...

“Hehehehe…good try trying to hold out as you did my little meat puppet but not good enough. Now that I have you…you will start a war start with the country ...

I had a whole huge thing written up, but what it comes down to is this: The books are badly written. The characters are flat, boring and downright irritating. The ...

I really liked this one. We (mom, sister & me) listened to it in the car on a drive to Boston and it was so funny. I don't think I ...

It took me several tries to get into Sabriel , but once I forced myself through the first fifty-something pages I found I really enjoyed it. I returned it as ...

I read the first one on the flight to Beijing. It was okay. I'm not really into the crime solving type of story, but they were light and amusing and ...

The Astonishing Life of Octavian Nothing , by M.T. Anderson I just finished that one. It was good, and weird. As for dark ... if you're looking for, like, horror-story ...

Lena hovered, her lips only inches from his and for a moment, he could have sworn she was going to kiss him. It wouldn’t have been the first time he ...

I agree with Sleeping Valor on this one. The information was purposefully vague and I think it worked really well. If they'd actually told us what was going on, I ...