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Hey Ella_Mercy! I really liked this piece, especially for its succinctly vivid imagery :D You also have a interesting style of writing, with a very eye-catching quality :) This deserves ...

Hey there anima9! My first thought after this, was that this would make a spiffy monologue ;D Anyhoo, this was shorter than I'd expected so there isn't much room to ...

Hey Addawen19! I'm a little short on time, so I won't go into specifics. Okay, for descriptions, things like "her sapphire blue eyes sparkled", It is generally understood that sapphire, ...

I'm not a poet, But this was brilliant! Despite the serious tone of the poem, I was laughing at various parts throughout the poem. Oh, and excellent title. It really ...

Hey Kylan! :D I just happened to stumble across this, so... Well, I've always found it difficult to critique your works, 'cause you're "up there" and I'm "down here" in ...

Hey Gluzman! I don't think I've reviewed your stuff before, and its about time I did :) Since the grammatical errors have been pointed out, I think I shall leave ...

Hey AlphaGirl, I'm just going to talk about the plot, m'kay? Firstly, True Love, is not a common occurence. Love itself, is a term used much to liberally. Talking to ...

Hey Kat! I can't point out all the mistakes due to lack of time, but I've done some. I just want to show you she doesn’t love you. I was ...

Hey shishu! I think this story has promise to develop into something spectacular :D Hopefully this doesn't travel down the road of cliches. Surprise us, be real original. I agree ...

Hey TeenQueen, Just a heads up: This sounds like it belongs more in the Lyrics section. Unless poems have choruses ._. Oh, and one other thing: I would have liked ...

Hi Ermixon, This story is really long and I don't have the time to review it, But I'd advise you to review and edit your chapter before posting it first. ...

Gah, I'm highly annoyed now. I had an in-depth critique prepapred for you and kaput!- There it goes. *cries* Anyway, I shall just *sighs* give a brief commentary. 1) Music ...

Hi shaegirl, I noticed this didn't get any comments. Okay, first off, you're a new member, I see. Welcome to YWS :D Secondly, you need to read up on our ...

Hey Winter! I was only just passing by and browsing through your work, But something caught my eye: Shouldn't the last line end off with 'melancholic'? :D ~Have a great ...

Hey mike, Back with another story, eh? Anyway, you said to focus less on grammar, So I'll just give you a brief comment on what I thought of it. 1) ...