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I don't really see any mistakes that I can point out here, So good job with that. (then again, I have been known to be extremely blur.) I read the ...

*cracks fingers* Well, let's begin. We've got a lot to cover. I stand in the corner as I observed observe the guy that makes me twitch Weird reaction. Maybe you ...

One of the more orginal and rare plots I've come across, And very authentically written. I've done some research on Neanderthals too. Your story is very cool and descriptive. Though ...

Hello! I shall start off with some nitpicks: 1)The sentence mentioning Global Warming is awkwardly phrased, so you should revise that. Well, I'm done with the nitpicks. Good points: Grammar, ...

Hi, Your plot is rather interesting, though many Edward Cullen fans would kill you for killing him. But one thing my friend, Quid pro quo. There is an important rule ...

Lady Hitler is one way to catch the reader's attention. That was a good title, but the story has to fit it. The basic foundation of a writing a story, ...

Hey Anna! I can't believe you deleted your story 3 times before you finally posted it. It was good! I was hooked. I did an essay on an amnesiac before, ...

I'm done critiquing for the day, so this is just for relaxing reading. One thing that stood out i my mind while I was reading, was that Bella's thoughts and ...

Aww...that was so sweet. I'm a sucker for those hate-love stories. But the story seemed to progress a bit too fast at the end. He had just pushed the girl ...

Teenage girls these days? I really don't think that this applies to a huge majority of girls. Admittedly, not all of us are angels, But there are lots of really ...

*bawls* Thanks for the sob fest. Now I'm a tad peeved at Nora. Haha :D I didn't read your story with a critiquing eye, But I didn't spot anything out ...

I'm guilty of being twilight obsessed (But I learnt to move on and hook myself on something else XD) This was H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S This must really be your true feelings. I ...

Swollen and disgraced you still kissed me, then retreated behind your job. You were easy on the eyes and my skin. It’s a shame you are so busy, it’s probably ...

Well, everyone's pointed out the tense confusion thing. Other than that, my critiquing skills aren't good enough to pick up anymore flaws. If there even are anymore :) I like ...

Hi again! :) Now I'm wondering if: 1) Helen has lost her marbles & the world is twisted and disturbing or 2) Helen just lost her marbles. But once again, ...