Medusa

So. The first two parts are absolutely magnificent. I loved all the alliteration (sp?), and the religious-sexual mentions. This poem makes me really happy, even though it's like all dark ...

Oscar Wilde is delicious. I adore edgar allen poe, also. I'm so glad someone loves Rebecca too! Wooo! But dickens is awesome. Philophy: jung is great, along with confucious (although ...

Hello, I thought the piece, overall, was a bit confusing and also un-lyrical. Try reading more poetry, and giving clear yet poetic meaning to the poem. I fight, I brawl, ...

Hello, I'd like to start out by telling you the positives. this was an amazing work of literature and I was immensely impressed by the flow, diction, and use of ...

A few technical errors- 1. Yet they continued as if nothing was wrong. 2. He could feel it himself ; that sense of ignorance[s],[/s] ebbing at the hollows of his ...

"You're a Jew." "Yes." "My father says you're evil." "Mine says the same about yours." This has to be my favorite part. I love how it brings two worlds together--two ...

There is something a little dry in the dialogue. I think it stems from the lack of characterization. One major thing that made Alice in Wonderland great was how astonishingly ...

I have to admit, this was a bit simple for my taste. As Robin Williams states in Dead Poet's Society, sometimes the simplest things can be beauty--just make sure your ...

Um Great be honest I couldn't even finish it. The closest I have got to reading more Dickens is watching a BBC version of Bleak house on tv and writing ...

Eventually she figured out that I liked her smile and started talking to me This is very strange to me. I can't place my finger on it, but it just ...

It’s freezing cold They close the door The engine starts I’m stuck to the floor This last sentence is awkward in the rhyming. It seems like you're trying to hard ...

The orange glow of sixteen cigarettes [s]was [/s] -- all that was visible beside[s]s[/s] the stars I like the way this starts. Very beatnick type. Casual but tense. Interesting. You ...

Wow. I think time will change a lot of your minds. The great gatsby was one of my favorite books--its actually VERY realistic, exactly how the 20s were. I hate ...

Welcome to my world, my love. The repetition of "my" is kind of awkward. I think deleting the second "my" would help. ‘Tis a scary place. I wouldn’t know. For ...

I'm not going to give a critique on this series--as much as a [OMGZZZZZ]. I absolutely adored this story. No, seriously. There are few literary peices that make me more ...