MeadowLark

Heya there! Don't be nervous for posting your work here :) Also, don't take any critism to heart. We're here to help you improve your writing. So embrace it all ...

Heya there! I'm going to review this for you today. The Guillotine is towered over the townsfolk, they were unusually cheerful for being in the shadow of the ghastly machine. ...

Heya! Me again! I know, I think I'm hooked on your story ^_^ Good job with that! Ahem, now to the review. Firstly, I didn't really find anything wrong with ...

Hey there! Sorry it took me so long to get to this. I read it yesterday but I wasn't on here long enough to review it :( After an hour ...

Heya there Quill! Let's see what I can pick out. It was calm, eerily calm, the calm before the storm. This sounds repetitive and rather annoying with all the "calms". ...

Heya Worx! I finally managed to get here! Thanks for the PM. The town of Al Hilla was bustling today, as usual. I think "as usual" could be its own ...

Heya there! Let's see what I can find. So it was natural for her to be overwhelmed by those two facts to the extent that it took her some time ...

Heya dancingclouds! I'm going to review this for you. Changes are in bold, comments are in italics and spelling mistakes are underlined. I'm reviewing your piece in a way I'm ...

Heya Saph! “Um… Why is the Queen coming over here?” Serenity asked, panic showing on her face. Panic is showing on her face, eh? Well, you could elaborate on that. ...

Hey Pippie! Thanks for the PM! “Esme! we were just discussing how to proceed.” Zahra broke the quiet, as welcoming as ever. We needs to be capitilized. Also, the period ...

Heya there! Sorry it took so long, I have a tendecy to forget which stories I've begun reading xD Alright, to the review. I was hog-tied on the dungeon floor, ...

Hey there! I've never heard of this "Cowboy Bebop" before but I read the poem anyways. Not good at critiquing poetry but I noticed one thing: Till that one god ...

Hey there! All the mistakes have been pointed out. But I agree with the others. You need to draw the reader in more. Of course, though, the first two paragraphs ...

Hey Pippie! Sorry it took so long to get to this. I'm getting really bad at forgetting things ^_^ So, onwards! In every single novel or story there is a ...

Heya Stormy! Gosh, it sounds weird callign someone other than my horse, Stormy. Anyways, I actually did forget but thank-you for the PM. I think I need to write down ...