MeadowLark

Heya Rosey. I'm not so good at reviewing poems and I usually never read them, but this one caught my eye. I like how you showed the prospect of growing ...

Heya! Me again. Also, once again, I'm too late to nit-pick. They've all been caught! So let's see what else I can do... Characters: You show the MC's character very ...

Heya there! Lydia covered most of the grammer and all that. So since she's done all that, I'm going to cover some other stuff! Exciting, eh? I blinked in the ...

Heya! Thanks for the PM. Ya, there weren't many errors in this. So, good job! So let's see if I can actally comment on anything: Characters: I like how you ...

Heya there! Finally got here. Sorry it took so long! They had lost his trust, because they mingled with the Justice Fighters, his sworn enemy Add a had after they ...

Heya Alex! Whoo. I finally got here. Sorry it took so long ^_^ A screen door opened with a clink. The owner of the house stood there, a big black ...

Heya Dream! My, my. Another wondorous chapter again! But I do have a nit-pick or two ^_^ Ivory and I winced at the sound of her shrill voice. Her voice ...

Heya! Back again to give you another long review ^_^ I think I'm in love with long reviews. Anyways... A couple of months have passed since Pink had entered the ...

Heya! I read this earlier today I can say that I really enjoyed this. I'm having a hard time thinking on what to critique ^_^ I did notice a few ...

Okay! Here liked you asked ^_^ Just a note: Long posts tend to scare some people away. So perhaps next time shorten it down a bit. Now, onto the nit-picks. ...

Heya! I'm back! This is a rather long piece so I'm sure I missed some things. I then ran out of my room to the hallway and ran into one ...

Heya there Kiki! Tex seems to have gotten everything. But I have a couple of nit-picks. The gloves came off and another servant girl walked up to help her into ...

Hey there! I'm going to review this for ya! Lorenzo started up his pacing again and continued to think of all the possibilities of what could of happened to his ...

Heya! I'm going to review this for you! I stopped in my tracks before a couple of children ran past me laughing and a little girl running after them crying. ...

Heya Dream! Oh my, am I really drop dead gorgeous *blushes* Only joking. Once again you have written a wonderful chapter. Yet I found some nit-picks. Igor led us down ...