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Re: Autumn (Why is it Hard to Fall?)
This poem made me think. I like your thoughts and your ideas, how you look at it from different angles (snowflakes, raindrops, feathers, etc.) and how you give the reader ...
Dec 2, 2016 -
Re: n
I have to say, I really liked this poem! One of my favourite parts was: My bamboo leaves bristle in the breeze. The wind whistles through my hollow culm, rustling ...
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: rose-tinted glasses
Oh my gosh, I really like this poem! What has drawn me in was the cool thing you did with "illuminated". I saw it right away, and I was like: ...
Nov 9, 2016 -
Re: more than just fire
Hey marmalade, I quite like your poem! I like how you use metaphors and imaginary to express your idea, instead of just being like: "I am more than compulsive, and ...
Nov 9, 2016 -
Re: Yours truly, by V.T.W
My favorite part of the poem was: Painted by the colours of Summer Red, Yellow and Orange the intensity of your persona. Energetic. Magnetic. I like how you didn't just ...
Oct 6, 2016 -
Re: Why do I even try?
I liked: "Other times the pen falls/And I just freeze in time" It created a picture in my mind of a pen falling in slow motion, and "Why do I ...
Oct 4, 2016