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Ooh, I like the changes!

Those little Daleks. :)

This is perfect. Still cracking up.

You're welcome, glad to help. :)

I want more! Please expand! (I'd do a full review, but I'm pretty short on time. Maybe later.) It was awesome, though.

XD

I think he means to try new ways of writing that you might not think you can pull off right now, so you can learn what works/doesn't work. (I liked ...

I don't think it really changes.... Anyway, rhyme schemes often change from section to section, so I still don't think it needs it. As for the other thing, I'm not ...

Hey, that's a good point, I never thought about it that a way, God has the most perfect vision of all. What you said here wasn't really my intention (it's ...

My apologies, it posted twice for some reason.

For future reference, you can always post questions like these in the Writer's Corner. That's a more appropriate place for questions, and then you don't have to spend points.

the violence this work is rated 16+ for the violence involved in your removal of it? XD

Thanks. :)

Sorry for this random comment, I pressed the wrong button. Review forthcoming.

Thank you! :D This is great!