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Thank you for the feedback! I didn't use the commas because I wanted to create a really breakneck pace.

Thank you for the kind words!

Thank you! I was really hoping the alliteration created the pace I wanted.

Thanks for the reviews, as always! Ayda's used to dryads, which are human-size, which is why she doesn't comment much on the difference in size between her and Madeline. Still, ...

Ah, autocorrect. xD Thanks for the clarification! I'd thought he went through, but wasn't quite sure.

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I get you about structure. This first draft is actually already complete - I'm just posting it at regular intervals to get feedback. I plotted ...

Don't worry, that's a common question. Typically, no, that doesn't really work. It just winds up being too confusing, and since each character should have a different character voice, switching ...

You're very welcome!

Thank you very much!

:D I'm really glad you like Crescent Moon! As for Madeline's age, she says she's 13 when Ayda first meets her, so you're probably not imagining her too old. *does ...

Yes, it does, but it doesn't advance the main plot, and there's only so much of advancing side plots you can do. Plus, it's a case of reader expectations. This ...

Thank you as always!

I glad you liked it!

No problem, I'm glad it was helpful! :D

I'm dying. (Reign of the Judges. xD) EDIT: Also you put this in fanfiction and that makes it that much more hilarious.