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Re: The Aderyn: Chapter 5
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this Review Day. Now, I actually reviewed one of these chapters a while back, and I enjoyed this one even more ...
Sun Apr 03, 2016 5:12 am -
Re: The Void - Chapter 5
Hey there! I'm back for another review! So, I enjoyed this part too. I like that he finally decided to swallow his pride and go to rehab. One thing that ...
Sat Apr 02, 2016 9:14 am -
Re: survivors of lazurus Ch.2
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. So, I find myself with little to say, solely because you already got a really good review from writerkitty! But I will ...
Sat Apr 02, 2016 8:55 am -
Re: The Remarkable Blossoming of Lola - Chapter 4
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. Apologies in advance for not having read previous parts to the chapter. So, I actually really liked this. I especially like your ...
Fri Apr 01, 2016 12:28 pm -
Re: The Ambassador: Part Two
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. Overall, this was rather interesting - you clearly have the world and what's going on pretty well set in your head. I ...
Fri Apr 01, 2016 6:32 am -
Re: Banshee Part 2
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this! So, I kinda like this. I like how you didn't just randomly time skip, but instead you kind of summarized ...
Thu Mar 31, 2016 12:09 pm -
Re: Joanne Jacklon Book One- The Spark Chapter 4
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this. So, this isn't a bad chapter at all. You've got a good structure, and clearly the plot is beginning to ...
Thu Mar 31, 2016 4:21 am -
Re: Days of January Chapter Two
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this. So, I thought this was kind of a sweet chapter of a story. I liked the interaction with the girl, ...
Wed Mar 30, 2016 12:45 pm -
Re: The Void - Chapter 4
Hey there! I thought I'd come give this a quick review. Apologies for not having read previous chapters. This was pretty good. It was rather intense, and I really like ...
Wed Mar 30, 2016 12:35 pm -
Re: Subaquatic - Chapter 3
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. So, I thought this was pretty interesting. I like the voice of your main character - she's fairly distinctive. “Mom, if you ...
Tue Mar 29, 2016 11:33 am -
Re: Magic Survives: Chapter 2: (untitled)
Hey there! I saw this lurking at the back of the Green Room and thought I'd come give it a quick review. So, I like the conflict you have set ...
Tue Mar 29, 2016 10:05 am -
Re: In All That I Live For (Part 3)
Hey there! I'm back again. I liked this part better than the last, mostly because there was a lot less of the narrating and more actual scenes. However, I just ...
Mon Mar 28, 2016 8:17 am -
Re: In All That I Live For (Part 2)
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this. Since this is only part two, I did actually go back and read part one so I would understand what's ...
Mon Mar 28, 2016 7:52 am -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.04)
Hey there! I'm back again. I liked this chapter - it had a lighthearted, humorous vibe to it, and although it was mostly a transition/planning chapter you still managed to ...
Sun Mar 27, 2016 12:08 pm -
Re: That Way We Cope with That Thing Called Life - Part 4
Hey there! I'm back for a review on this, after having reviewed one of the previous parts months ago. I'm still really liking your tone, the quiet, intimate feel of ...
Sun Mar 27, 2016 11:39 am
