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Re: Fanfiction- chapter 6
All right! I'm here for the review on this fine review day. I like this - the whole pancakes thing is hilarious. And "torture by pancakes" is exactly the sort ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.09)
Hey, I'm back again. I'm really impressed with how you're keeping this going and actually keeping your plot coherent and tying the small things together. I'm also really enjoying your ...
May 26, 2016 -
Re: Val: 3
Hi there! I'm dropping by for a review. I did read the previous parts, since this is only part three, and overall, it's fairly engrossing. The second person narration is ...
May 22, 2016 -
Re: The Last Archon CH1: Remembering Shadows
Saw this in the Green Room and figured I'd go ahead and review it. I like this. Your ideas are interesting, and I really like Morn, and Katya too. I ...
May 19, 2016 -
Re: I Have Learned to Hate the Dark
Hi! Thought I'd review this for you. Also, according to my statistics, this is the first poem I've reviewed in more than three months. So sorry if it's rusty? :P ...
May 15, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 28 (Once Upon a Time)
Hi, I'm back again! I agree with what Adri said about Kaelin not really seeming like she's changed in the last 40 years. I would still guess her to be ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.08)
Hey there! I'm back again. Again, I don't have too much to say, just because this is very good. I liked the way they found the phone - I can ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 26 (Once Upon a Time)
Aww, this chapter made me smile. I think I've finally figured out exactly what's going on here with the switching chapters, and I like it. It's especially interesting because I ...
May 4, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 23 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey there! I'm back again, creeping through your story very slowly. So I really liked this part. I liked how they decided to band together and I thought the end ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: The Void - Chapter 8
Hey there, I'm back again, you know the drill. xD Still going strong. This is quite good, and although I don't really know the ins and outs of therapy this ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 35
Hey there! I have a feeling I reviewed one of the chapters of this a long while back, but I'm afraid I don't remember much of anything so I'm looking ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Eight, Part Three - The End of a Very Long Exposition
Hey there. Back again, and this time I actually don't have too much to say, but I'll give it a shot anyway. I know this was written for LMS, but ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Untitled Novel : [Chapter 7 : If You're Leaving and No One's Home]
Hey there, here for a quick review. Haven't read previous parts, so bear with me. Hm. I think what I'm missing in this chapter are stakes for your main character. ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: The Aderyn: Chapter 6
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. I believe I reviewed one of the earlier parts to this, and I'm back now. Something I really liked here was how ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 9.1]
Let's get right into it, then. Overall: This is a rather short part, and it kind of feels like it cuts off right in the middle of an important point. ...
May 1, 2016
