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Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 2
Hey fortis! Thanks for letting me know about this one.
Tue Mar 07, 2017 3:52 am -
Re: The Water is Kind - Chapter 1: The Interview
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this today. So this is very competently written throughout. The story is engaging and easy to follow, and ...
Sun Mar 05, 2017 11:11 pm -
Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 1.2
Hey fortis! I thought I'd review this just cause it looked interesting and I've been meaning to get into more people's LMS stories. And I definitely wasn't disappointed - I'm ...
Sun Mar 05, 2017 10:44 am -
Re: No Destination (Chapter 2: Cain)
Hey there! I figured I'd drop by for a quick review today. So, this is pretty cool. Right away, I liked both characters, although Cain more than Abel mostly because ...
Sat Mar 04, 2017 11:17 am -
Re: the camera
Hey!
Thu Mar 02, 2017 10:07 pm -
Re: Aftershock series 1) journey to oasis
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review of this story today. So, what I got from this is that this is set in a futuristic world ...
Thu Mar 02, 2017 11:02 am -
Re: Hornet's Nest
So, this is interesting. It's certainly a very particular type of story, almost more like poetry in the way that it focuses more on the language and imagery rather than ...
Tue Feb 28, 2017 10:03 pm -
Re: My view on future (based on a Victor Hugo quote)
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this interesting piece. Overall, I think you did a pretty good job with this, especially considering your very ...
Mon Feb 27, 2017 10:03 pm -
Re: 1
Hey there! I'm here on this lovely review day to kick this thing out of the Green Room for once and for all. So, the first thing I noticed as ...
Sun Feb 26, 2017 11:18 pm -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 40
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by with a review on this Review Day! I'll be diving straight in without much knowledge of what's going on, but hopefully I'll be ...
Sun Feb 26, 2017 10:09 pm -
Re: Richard & Rebecca: Chapter Three -Safety-
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by with a quick review today. I'm not really sold on your spelling of Magickian. It's just hard to read, and although magick is ...
Sun Feb 26, 2017 11:02 am -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 21 ~ The Dream Felistia
Hey! I'm here to get going on this review. :D This is an interesting chapter because we spend a lot of time in Zoltar's head and really feel how worried ...
Sat Feb 25, 2017 9:14 am -
Re: Ordadus [1.2]
Well, talk about having a fast inciting incident. :P Honestly, this was great and I'm sure I'm going to struggle finding anything to critique. I suppose it almost felt too ...
Fri Feb 24, 2017 12:16 pm -
Re: The Jerikova Wars, Chapter Five
Well, I can't say I didn't see that coming. (That the mysterious attacker was a Prince.) Honestly, this is really well-written. I enjoyed this thoroughly, even though I haven't read ...
Wed Feb 22, 2017 10:22 pm -
Re: Hidden Entity - 3.1 - The Crater
Hi Light! Yep, already doing the review. :D So, I kind of like that Anam thinks of Ilal as a girl and that Alta thinks of them as a guy. ...
Wed Feb 22, 2017 8:55 am