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Back again as usual! The placement of the first scene felt strange - for one thing, before I hadn't been sure if Freya's match had ended yet or if her ...

You had to have noticed, right? Or are you just that dense? He’s visited this school with his father countless times. It’s been having an effect on him, ever since ...

Hey there camusic! I'm here to give you the review you asked for in my Will Review for Food thread. First off, I really liked this! I think this is ...

Back as usual. I can’t. I can’t sit back down. His punches ached, but this one stung badly. I think he broke a rib. My father noticed, as he crouched ...

Alright, I'm back. I saw your wall post, but I thought I'd go ahead and review these anyway since I put in the work to read the rest of the ...

Hey Thundah. I just spent an hour or so reading through all the parts of this so I can review all the ones still in the Green Room. Before I ...

I knew it was a trap! (Okay, actually, I didn't, but I 100% expected them to get caught.) For me, the most fascinating part about this was everyone's reaction to ...

Yes, we're finally here! :D Pan is way too good at covering every bit of critique, but I'll see what I can come up with This is a well-executed part. ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today to get this out of the Green Room. Yeah, this doesn't quite belong here as a literary work. ...

Hey there! This has been sitting in the Green Room far too long without any reviews, so I'm here to help rescue it. I also went ahead and read your ...

Hey Vivian! Sorry for the delay in reviewing this, but I'm here now. Escape! Definitely exciting. I really like Korra, by the way. She's brave and practical and also really ...

Hey there! I'm here for what will be a pretty quick review on this lovely Review Day. I like how you immediately create conflict and suspense in the opening, with ...

So, I went back and read the other parts in addition to this, and this is cool. Current guess for whatever void is is either some kind of android or ...

Hey there, I'm back. Avery makes me laugh, but she also makes me cringe because of *course* she assumed that she didn't have to do any work because Finn would ...

Hey, Thundah. I'm tired of seeing this back in the Green Room so I decided to review it for Review Day. I haven't read all of the previous chapters, but ...