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And back again! familiar stench of iodoform Ooh, foreshadowing/backstory hint? Nice, subtle and well-worked into the narrative. I really like the focus on Eli here, both on his determination and ...

Hey Sonder! Back for a review as always. :) I really liked the second part of this chapter. Holy in the actual heck West is creepy/intimidating, and finally getting to ...

Hey Arayna! I haven't reviewed a poem in a good couple of months, so bear with me if my poem reviewing skills are extremely rusty. I really like the central ...

Hey Scar! I meant to do this review yesterday, but ran out of time, sadly. I liked this chapter a lot because of Puck and because it did a lot ...

Hey Scar! I'm back for another review. Overall, the highlights of this chapter were definitely the characters - getting to meet Jae and Luke and see their interactions. Luke didn't ...

Hey, Scarli! I noticed these chapters have been sitting in the Green Room for way too long, so I figured I'd come by and start reviewing from here, at least ...

Hey shaniac! I'm back for another review, as per usual! I liked the interactions between Ronnie and Shane here. They were just funny. I can't help but feel bad for ...

Hey Dark! I'm back to continue my stream of mostly-gushing reviews. :D Louise came up to her, her arms stretched out, and for one mad moment Hildegarde thought she was ...

Oh, Hildegarde. Poor, poor Hildegarde. I'm so glad Louise actually gave her some emotional support here. They've had way too little of it at the orphanage. And everything, the way ...

Hi Light! I'm back as usual to review. :) Haka stopped it with his hands pressing it from the sides. OH LOOK A LASTCLAP. (Have you read Way of Kings/Words ...

Hey Sonder! Back as always for another review. Aw, Seb. He's sweet. Why do I already have a feeling something horrible is going to happen to him eventually? Also, I'm ...

Hey there, shan! I'm back as usual for another review! I really like Patsy as a character in this chapter, and how she just kind of puts up with Chloe ...

Hey Dark! Back again as always to review this. :) I love the small things here, like that you refer to Thelsadore's laugh as a glockenspiel laugh. It's just such ...

Hey there! Thanks for requesting a review in my thread, and I really apologize this took so long to get to - life kicked me hard this week. I'll try ...

Hey Bethan! I thought I'd come review this for yah today. :) Meant to do it yesterday, but well, life got in the way. I'll just tell you a bit ...