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Or am I falling into something that I shouldn't ? Is this love ? Don't forget the two question marks! (Just in case you didn't notice I put them in ...

That was a brilliant peice! It was a slight hard to understand at first read, for myself. I really like how you build up to think that it might just ...

I'm glad to say that this is one of the first '5 reasons...' posts that I have actually enjoyed and didn't offend anyone. I'm glad that you chose reviews as ...

Yes this reminded me of a fable but with native-american origins (I think the native-americans had the gods of sky and earth and such.) I found it very entertaining and ...

Unconditionally, - I don't think you really need this and it sounds bad as a starting line. I'll stay here by your side. That's what you told me Then, you ...

Refresh the spirit Renew your soul Face your dread . Don't fear it Find new opportunities . Go near it Make them your goal And then again you will be ...

I'm just another angry kid with no home training another liar with teenage angst - Does this mean teenage fear? just another girl stained with pain I'm just another broken ...

Corrections are bolded. I sit atop my rooftop world, Pondering reality: Why do we fear the night, And what the day will bring? - I don't think this goes well ...

Corrections and stuff are bolded. I remember you walking through the door. You were a mess, all tangles and grime and tears. - This should be a , And your ...

Awsome | Nitpick | Possible Change A beam of energy hit her back and the world around her faded from sight. - Where did this beam of energy come from? ...

My title suggestion is 'To the pits of The Fire he goes' Awsome | Nitpick | Possible Change and fire in your heart. - I would have gone with Ice ...