Mazuurek

Hey there! First off, I'd like to say that I'm frustrated the woman never revealed what her wish was, and the fact that I'm frustrated goes to show that your ...

Hey there, I saw this in the Green Room and thought I'd drop some comments. This story is rather coincidental, because the last thing I reviewed was also something on ...

Hey there, I spotted this story in the Green Room and thought I'd drop a few comments. First off, the whole theme of imperfect immortality isn't too unusual, but I'll ...

Hey Lightsong, here's a review as promised. This chapter part did a decent job in clarifying any doubts from the prologue and introducing a new character. It also established the ...

Hey there, I saw this short story in the green room and thought I'd drop a review. First off, I thought that you did well with your descriptions. The interaction ...

Hey there, I was browsing through the Green Room and spotted this, so I thought I'd drop by and review. This is a pretty simple and short story, but in ...

Hey there, I spotted this short story in the Green Room and thought I'd give it a read. First of all, nice twist at the end! I was well and ...

Hey there, I spotted this on the Spotlight and thought I'd drop a review. This story isn't as much a story as a simple feedback-and-response piece, but I can see ...

I shall be reviewing this piece as merely an introduction to the rest of the story, as you have clarified with me before. Introductions need you to reveal enough information ...

To say that this prologue is "well-written" or "amazing" would be to do disservice to the excruciatingly long-winded and complex process of planning, drafting and finally writing a novel. No ...