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Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter Six, Part One
Thanks for the review Malice! I agree that the description of the door needs editing, and I'll be sure to edit those other points! Thanks again!
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter Two
Speaking of attention to detail, this review is a short novel! Thank you so much! I'll be sure to cut that filler, I agree, the shower scene goes on for ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.1
Okay, but now for my review of this actual chapter! XD. This was my favorite chapter so far, it flowed easily, and was interesting and enjoyable to read, and I ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter Five
Thanks so much for your review forever! Why did he suddenly quit his studies? He has done so many degress in so many things. There must be a reason behind ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter One
Oh, thank you so much for the review harry! I'm glad I can get a second set of nerd eyes on this story so I can make sure all my ...
Sep 8, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.3
Also, found you answer to the camera question, a great answer, but I as an audience member wouldn't know that, and so would still be confused about it, XD. So, ...
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.3
Awwww, chill this definitely helped! Sometimes I can forget I'm still just at the beginning of something when I read it in chunks so slowly XD. I totally get the ...
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: The misadventures of a man named Lucifer.
Hey, Andrew here! I'd love to review your piece, as I bet many others would, but I would advise splitting it into smaller chunks, on YWS, most people don't go ...
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: Currently Untitled Novel Chapter 1
Another? What are you up too Harry? XD
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: My World- Prologue
Ummm, Harry, this prologue is like 8 years old And has only one more chapter it. What are you doing XD?
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.2
ooooh, chiiiiillll
Sep 4, 2021 -
Re: Never Forget - Part Two - 1 Hours, and 14 Minutes
Thanks again so much for your review! I'll be sure to edit those things! I'm glad you liked the idea of him saving jimmy, I didn't have much time to ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: Never Forget - Part Two - 1 Hours, and 14 Minutes
Thank you so much for the review! I'm super glad you liked the story! And I have always toyed with the post-apocalypse zombie genre, so you may see a longer ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: Never Forget - 14 Hours, and 28 Minutes
Thank you so much for your review Stellar!!!! I'll make sure to edit those things! And yes, that surrender gently thing was a typo, but I'm glad you liked it! ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: Never Forget - 14 Hours, and 28 Minutes
Thaaaaanks so much for the review! I will make sure to edit those things! On the gun thing, yeah, your right, I don't know a ton about guns, so thanks ...
Sep 3, 2021