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Andrew here with you're Harsh Review! sorry that's a bit late, but the last couple days have been wild! I am bad at poetry, so my critique skills are limited, ...

Hey, Andrew here for a review! I've obviously seen you around a lot Lizzy, but I've never actually reviewed anything you've written, so this should be fun! Overall, this piece ...

Tbh, I kinda forgot I wasn’t supposed to be reviewing this chapter when daisies name came out cuz I was to invested in the plot. So that’s a good sign ...

Okay, so sorry, this is coming a little later than expected, but here I am! My reviewing style is still evolving, so we'll see how this goes: Overall, liked this ...

Andrew here for a speeeedy little review (hehe see my drug reference there) I'd agree with @missGangamash overall that this is verrrry rushed The tense is confusing, most of the ...

Andrew here for your Harsh Review ! I am trying a new style of reviewing, so tell me what you think of it. This chapter is a good follow-up on ...

Andrew here for a review! Overall, I liked this story, it was powerful and well written. The pros were beautiful in some places if a bit wordy and clunky in ...

Andrew here for a liiiiigggghhhhhtning fast review. Hmmmm, was thinking, not trying to edit your book for you here at all, but there is a *lot* and I mean a ...

Hellooo, Andrew here for you’re Harsh Review! This may not be *as* long as I would hope since I’m super busy right now, but I’ll give you the best I ...

Andrew here with a review! Excited to be seeing the plans unfold and more of Arias's personality! Mrs. Kane began with an introductory speech of sorts. Aria tuned it out ...

Andrew is here to try to review this! I cannot compete with @fireeyes review, but I do like humourous poems quite a bit (in fact they might be the only ...

Andrew here for a review! I can't believe an escape is actually gonna be occurring... how exciting. The chapter was well written, but I feel it could have built the ...

Andrew here for a little review. This chapter continued the vibe of the last chapter, if a bit reprieve of previous times we have walked in hallways, there's also a ...

Andrew here with a snappy review! This is a good calm after meeting the aliens and does a good job to let us see our characters interact with each other. ...

Hey, Andrew here with your harsh review! First impression: The metaphorical language is strong here, and the prologue reads like some strange fever dream (either to your advantage or disadvantage) ...