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Andrew here with a review! These questions really help, so I'll jump into it now! 1. I've heard my pacing is an issue and chapters come across as rushed. Am ...

Hey! Andrew here for a review! First off, I really like the Letter style of story writing! Overall, I found this interesting, the metaphors and writing style are good, and ...

Andrew here with a review! Overall, I like the idea of writing a story through letters, but I feel you are not making full use of this story device. This ...

Andrew here with a quick review! I was glad to see another chapter of Eraser shavings out, so here I am. There are some grammatical mistakes here and there, but ...

Andrew here for a quick review! Well, this story is definitely a little adventure. It's well written, short and bitter, and cool it's based on an actual piece of graffiti. ...

Andrew here with a review! Like MissGangamash I don't really know how to review this thought piece, but here goes! Overall your message is nice, and I think some people ...

Andrew here for you're review! Another interesting chapter showing you have quite a vibrant world and backstory waiting to be discovered as the story goes on. My main complaint with ...

Andrew here with a review! Here to return the favor of the excellent reviews I have gotten from you. My first impression is that this story is interesting the setting ...

Andrew here with a review! I am THE WORST at peorty, and I've never really reviewed it before... so I'll use on the review formats the figure things out, sorry ...

Andrew here with the review! Sorry, it is late, my week got suddenly busy! But I am here to do the reviewing nonetheless. This chapter was pretty good. The main ...

Andrew here with you're harsh review! I didn't quite remember the first chapter, so I went back gave it a quick skim, so hopefully, I didn't miss anything. I'd advise ...

Andrew here for a review! HARRY WAS PICKED WOO GOOD FOR HIM. I'm interested to see why this crazy twist of fate has occurred to allow all three of our ...

Andrew here with a review! I really thought this chapter was cool, and once again the themes of darkness a corruption on the land really shares a lot of themes ...

Andrew here to review this chapter, and then hopefully the next! I really liked this chapter it was creepy, I felt for the main character, and I can feel the ...

Andrew here with you're Harsh Review! sorry that's a bit late, but the last couple days have been wild! I am bad at poetry, so my critique skills are limited, ...